Poetry

Poetry

Attention

Pay attention, the teacher demanded
as one student stared out a window
and another fidgeted endlessly.

On the base
the soldier stood at attention
waiting to be put at ease.

At the coffee shop
young entrepreneurs
showing continuous partial attention
checked their cellphones.

But what do you pay attention to?
Classes? Officers? Details?
What about fears, desires,
messages before the break of day,
and beauty?

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Knitting

She learned to knit
from her older sisters,
it was something they could do together
on cold winter nights.

Knit two, pearl one

One by one they left home
and soon she was knitting baby blankets
for nieces and nephews.

Then her sisters starting knitting
baby blankets
for her.

At family gatherings
they would knit
and talk about
their children.

At the church sewing circle
she would share tea rings with friends
gossip
and make scarves for orphans.
Life was good.

Knit one, pearl two.

When her father died,
(Parkinson’s)
followed soon after
by her mom
(a broken heart)
knitting kept her centered
peaceful,
rarely dropping a stich.

It was harder when her husband left

Knit two, drop one.

Eventually,
she started knitting baby blankets again
for her grandchildren.
They took longer than they used to
but still came out well.

Then there were the wakes
for her friends from the sewing circle.
The survivors would still knit
as they remembered the early years,
but without as much vigor.

Knit one, drop two.

Her hands were slowing down,
less stable,
and she started dropping
more stitches.

There were days
when she’d rip out
more
than she knitted.

The doctor said it was
essential tremors,
not Parkinson’s.
It relieved her,
but the knitting
still became harder.

Her sisters were now gone
So were her friends
from the sewing circle.

Knitting became solitary.
It became frustrating,
no longer the peaceful
meditation
it had once been.

Finally,
she put down
her knitting needles.

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#Rhizo15 Online Associative Poetry

When I was younger and it was my turn to put the children to bed, I would grab a few poetry anthologies to read to them. I would typically start off with one poem, and then moved to another poem that was somehow connected to the first, at least in my own mind.

Years later, I would go to ‘social dreaming matrices’ where people would share dreams and associations they had to the dreams. It was a challenge to resist the urge to interpret the dreams and instead to just share associations and observations about these associations.

Now that our youngest daughter is now a teenager, we have a new activity. We will sit around the dining room table and have a ‘riff off’. One person would play a song, typically from YouTube or Spotify on one electronic device or another. The next person would then play a song related to the first, and we would go around taking turns associating one song to the previous.

Recently, I’ve been thinking about this with poetry, combining the childhood reading of poetry with the free association on dreams or music, free associating from one poem to the next in an online community.

It seems to fit nicely with the whole rhizomatic learning event I’ve been participating in and it might be a fun thing to try there. I will share this post in the Practical Discussion group on Facebook. For that group, a starting poem could be The #Rhizo15 Artifact poem I wrote for this week. One person could share a poem they associate to this poem, and then others could share poems they associate with each subsequent poem. If they really like the idea, they could start a similar rhizomatic sharing of a poem with associations in other places, which could potentially serve to start other associative poem sharing in a fractal manner.

I will also probably start a similar thread on my own Facebook page and see if either of these take off.

The #Rhizo15 Artifact

We shall not cease from exploration
And the end of all our exploring
Will be to arrive where we started
And know the place for the first time.

Many paths converged
(each path a learning subjective)
out of the directed graph
of carefully measured online posts;

the content in the creators,
the content in the community,

arriving back at the initial thoughts
as foretold by Eliot
and foreshadowed by Joyce.

riverrun, past Eve and Adam's, from swerve of shore to bend
of bay, brings us by a commodius vicus of recirculation back to
Howth Castle and Environs.

Along the way
we experience
the goddess
the temptress
the father,
we kill the Buddha
and get of the idea
of ‘dave’.

The ultimate boon?
An artifact?
A map?
L’objet petit a?
Perhaps an amulet
or talisman
that can assist the next hero
in their journey.

A Summer Evening Storm

It was a light fog,
not enough to be dangerous
or obscure objects,
just enough to add a halo
around lamp posts
and a softness to distant views.

Above, there was a flickering,
perhaps from stray headlights
caught in the fog,
an optical illusion,
or perhaps
from far away lightning.

The flickering became more frequent
and the roll of thunder
answered one question
to be replaced with another.

Would the storm pass to the north
or would we feel the full force?
Was it something beautiful,
something dangerous,
or a little bit of both?

It was all a matter of perspective
that the start of the rain
did not help resolve.

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