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First Lines

It is quiet in the cold dark house. A single light whams the living room. The grandfather's clock chimes. Outside, the birds are singing in the early morning drizzle. I sit, with my computer in my lap, looking at the screen, trying to find the first line.

I know what I want to write about, and the moment I find the opening sentence, I expect the words will flow out rapidly, falling one over another.

I started thinking about first lines recently, when someone posted a link to the American Book Review's 100 Best First Lines from Novels.

"Call me Ishmael" leads the list. I read through it, and found many old friends; lines that I've often quoted: "riverrun, past Eve and Adam's", " It was the best of times, it was the worst of time", "Someone must have slandered Josef K", "Once upon a time and a very good time it was there was a moocow coming down along the road".

I could easily let lost in reverie thinking about these first lines, but it made me think about blogging. Can you remember the first line of any blog posts? Are there any blog posts that you've written that you feel really proud about the first lines?

As I think back over my years of blogging, very few of my first lines are memorable. The first one that comes to mind is a blog post I wrote for work over a year ago which starts, "For a brief moment, I was five years old again in the small sandbox behind my house." There have been a few other blog posts that have started off well. They have typically been posts for work that start off with a story from long ago.

At 11:26 AM, EDT on July 8, 2011, the Space Shuttle Atlantis lifted off on the final voyage of the Space Shuttle Program.It seemed like every year or two a classmate of mine in high school would die in an accident.

So, what first lines do have you written that feel the most compelling? What do you do to come up with good first lines? For me, I set aside extra time to find that first line. If it is morning, perhaps I have some coffee and oatmeal while I wait for the line to come. Now, I'll add scanning the American Book Review's list of 100 Best First Lines from Novels to my methods of searching for inspiration.

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Epistolary Blogging

Dear Bill,

Recently, I read yet another person bewailing who people don’t write letters anymore. I rolled my eyes and scanned the latest rants of the neo-luddite. Nothing in the screed was noteworthy or memorable, and I wouldn’t be writing about it, except for the thought that struck me. It is possible to write in an epistolary style online. It might even be an interesting blog experiment, if someone is up for it. Lacking such a blog writing pen pal, I thought if the next best thing.

I have various books that are collections of letters between famous writers. A few years ago, Kim got me “The Letters of Denise Levertov and William Carlos Williams”. They are two of my favorite poets and I thought, could I add myself into their letters? Could I respond to Denise Levertov in my own voice, as a response to one of her letters to William Carlos Williams?

As I glanced through the letters, they seemed filled with mutual admiration. It was very touching, really. Yet, they were not the sort of letters I would imagine myself writing or receiving. So, I’ll try to find one of my other collections of literary letters to see if I can find some material to work off of.

Do you have any suggestions? Write soon.

Kind regards,
Aldon

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Rabbit, Rabbit, Rabbit. Happy New Year. 1/1/11.

What a difference a year makes. I spent most of last year consulting. It was lots of one off contracts; small little jobs, often with a political slant. I got a lot of writing done, fairly good writing, I believe done. Much of it was on the blog. I probably tweeted less and didn’t attempt National Novel Writing month. The family dog died. We adopted a new dog. Friends and relatives died.

Then, in October and November, things started getting busy. I wrote a bit for the Bethwood Patch. I haven’t written there for a few weeks, because my new job has been taking up all my attention. After a decade of mostly freelance consulting, I’ve returned to the nine to five in the office routine. I’m still settling in there, and look forward to a lot of writing there.

But looking a little deeper, things haven’t really changed all that much. My writing form may have changed a little. The topics I am focusing on may have changed a little. The predictability of my cashflow may have changed a little, but deep down inside, things really haven’t changed all that much.

Last year, I wrote:

I will try to slow down, to just say no to museum running and trying to live each moment more fully and more lovingly than the previous.

In 2009, I quoted an old Calvinist joke applying it to 2008 saying

What did the Calvinist say when he fell down the stairs?
Thank God, that’s over.

As I tried to find words to frame a resolution for the year, I wrote:

Yes, I would like to make a difference, to somehow help people find their voices and get more involved in the public sphere, yet that boulder seems not to be budging very much.

In 2008, I asked

What are the parallel processes taking place between my family life, the mailing lists that I’m on, blogging communities that I’m part of, and our nation and the world? Is there some sort of master narrative that can be found? Where do dreams and ideas like Social Dreaming fit in?

So, perhaps each succeeding year does not make as much difference as we might think, but is really simply a convenient checkpoint to look at a much bigger story. How did last year fit into the broader story of your life, the life of your community and the life of your world? How will next year fit in?

Will it be a Happy New Year? I sure hope so.

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Year End Review

Stace has a blog post up about her top ten blog posts of 2010. So, I thought I’d take a moment and review my blogging.

This blog post will be my 494th blog post of the year. If you include the seventeen posts I wrote for the around the towns column on Bethwood Patch, and a few posts that I wrote for on my new internal blog at Community Health Center, Inc. I am well over 500 posts for the year.

The blog posts on Orient Lodge that have gotten the most traffic are
My New Nokia #N900 #Android Phone
Running Java on an #N900
My Update Adventure #N900 PR 1.3, NitDroid, Titan, and MeeGo
Configuring the Nokia #N900 Chameleon for Mer, MeeGo and Fedora
MeeGo 1.1, Partitions, Bootmenu, Kernel Power, Flasher, and All That Stuff on the #N900

Hmm... I think I see a trend. In fact, the top twenty blog posts, in terms of traffic, are all about the Nokia N900. Coming in at 21 was EC Analytics. This was a program I wrote for people using both EntreCard and Google Analytics to find which sites on EntreCard have sent the most traffic to a blog according to Google Analytics as opposed to Entrecard’s own analytics.

I used this program fairly extensively from time to time which is part of the reason it is high on the list.

By the way, these are the EntreCard users that have been most engaged in Orient Lodge over the past year according to my calculations using Google Analytics:
First Door on the Left
Fatherly Yours
Small Town Mommy
Parent Times
The Sewing Mom

With the exception of The Sewing Mom, all of them had over 200 pageviews on Orient Lodge over the past year. Sewing Mom is one click away. Thank you to all my regular readers.

It seems like there are at least two very different audiences, one for blog posts about the Nokia N900 and one from regular readers from sites like EntreCard.

Coming in 23rd was Google Maps and Drupal Location; not about the Nokia N900, but geeky nonetheless. At 24 was The Death of Jeter and Jezzebelle. Stories about dogs, while not as popular online as geeky blog posts often get a lot of traffic. At 25 was yet another Nokia N900 story.

There are probably a few other year end topics I should explore. We’ll see if I get another post or two up by the end of the year.

Helpful Comments

Yesterday, Dave Lucas left a comment on my blog post about OneTrueFriend. As comments go, it was a pretty good one. It inspired me to write this blog post. The gist of his comment was that he’s looking to redesign his blog and wanted suggestions. I’ll probably add a few of them towards the end of the post.

However, in his comment, he mentioned receiving a comment from someone else that said,

"... your site has far too many things going on. It’s difficult to navigate and everything seems so random. There are odd links all over mixed with Google Adsense ads and widgets that don’t seem to be relevant to your topic.

The color schemes don't match, your profile picture is of poor quality, and there are simply too many distractions.

Also, the donate button is the first thing people see. I would move it to the end of your posts. If people see value after reading your article, they might be more inclined to donate. Seeing that in your sidebar like that is a big turn off.

To be honest, when I see a site like this, I just leave. Readers want a simple, easy to navigate site. There are so many good blogs out there that when they see one that is structured poorly, they lose interest immediately...."

Now, I don’t know who left that comment on Dave’s blog and if the person is currently, or perhaps was formerly a friend of Dave’s, or if Dave paid to receive that comment. I am going to guess that the person was not a friend and that the person was not paid to make the comment. Based on this, I would suggest that the comment is worth about what Dave paid for it and if he politely ignores it, he will not lose a friend, or probably anyone that he wants as a reader.

I mean seriously, who in their right mind would leave a comment like that? I could see leaving a comment something like, “Dave, is there some reason you that green background? It looks weird to me” or “Dave, I always have problems finding the Recent Visitors widget you have. Do you think you could make it more prominent?” or even, “Dave, I thought I used to be in your blog roll, but I can’t find myself there any more.” These could be helpful hints done in a friendly manner. Personally, however, the green color and the position of the Recent Visitors widget aren’t really things that I’m all that interested in.

No, my guess is that the comment may have been from some self appointed “expert” in websites wishing to demonstrate their expertise in a manner that is unwanted and unwarranted.

That said, Dave did ask for recommendations, and I’ll toss out a couple, which other people might want to think about as well. First, why did you pick the colors you are using? I chose mine to match the color scheme of the house that Orient Lodge was named after. Very deliberate. I try to use the same color scheme as many places as I can. Sure, a person with a better graphical eye might have better suggestions, but it meets my purpose. So, Dave, got a reason for the colors you use? If not, see if you can come up with a reason, or shift colors around till you get a color scheme you can tell a good story about.

Dave’s site currently has two columns; one for content, one for widgets. He’s got a lot of widgets. If I were Dave I would consider cutting back on the widgets, or at least setting up a second column to spread out the widgets a little better. In my case, I often add and remove widgets. I move them up or down depending on how important they are to me, where I want them place relative to other widgets, etc. Some widgets I move out of my template and put in widget graveyard pages. The same thing for awards and stuff like that. I’ve even started using different blogrolls depending on which part of the blog people are looking at.

Related to that, I’d make the content wider. By the looks of it, Dave’s site is designed for people with monitors as small as 800 pixels across. My site was designed for people with 640 pixel wide screens. Then I expanded to 800 pixels, and now my target is for people with screens 1024 pixels across or wider. Granted, all of this is likely to change as more and more traffic comes from cellphones, but if I were Dave, I might consider making the whole page wider. That is, of course, unless his mom is reading it on an old monitor, or some other good reason for keeping it smaller.

As to readers losing interest and leaving, it’s their loss. Dave writes some great content and I’ll keep reading it no matter how he redesigns his website.

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